The year is 2010, and there lived the strongest man on earth. His name is Saitama, they call him One Punch Man. He lived just out of the town called Paihia. When the people of Paihia wanted his help, they would send a signal up into the sky to let him know. But there was another strong hero that had entered the town, and his name is Superman. He is so cool, he too is strong and can fly and shoot laser beams out of his eyes. The town’s people sent out the signal for help. There was a strange person in town that was laser beaming all the red cars. Saitama went to town to see why this person was wrecking all the red cars.
“STOP” said Saitama, “Who are you?”
“I am Superman.” he replied
“Why are you wrecking the cars?”
“Because it makes me angry when I see the colour Red.”
Saitama said, “If I can help you would you stop?”
“YES” said Superman.
One Punch Man had made some glasses that Superman could wear, and by using them everything he looked at was his favourite colour blue. So in the end they decided to work together. The people of Paihia were safe.
George, this is such an awesome story. I know you are very proud of it, and I am very proud of the effort you have put in to writing it. Remember when you post to say what you were learning, what you did well and what you could do better next time.
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ReplyDeleteI love the way you did writing that you like and I saw that you added capital letters at every full stop. I think you got a bit confused when you said he is so cool, he too is strong because that does not make sense. When did you write this, bye George.